All well and good using straplines and homiles captured from Facebook but the original post remains unintelligible, when redrafted it might contain some really good stuff.

Genuine advice.....have a look at the Campaign for plain English website. If your target audience (presumably in this case those who post to this and other fan sites), doesn't understand the message, presume first that the message isn't clear and try again, rather than assuming your message has fallen on deaf ears.