You need to work on your syllable count. 7-10 on lines 1,2 and 5, and only 5-7 on lines 3 and 4.
There's a debate about the word chippy
Where teuchters can soon become nippy
They've called it a chipper
Since being a nipper
But the rest of us think they are dippy
That would work a bit better for you......apart from the obvious error in thinking people who say chipper are in the wrong. Southern weirdos.




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