Donanddusted ... good effort ... so nearly there min ... if only ye'd got those short 4th and fifth lines sorted .. cos, ken? the standard has been so high of late ... maybe the rhythm o' yer last line needs a wee tweak as well ...
Ah'll help ye oot here.
There was a team called United
Everytime they played they'd shyte it
The season now spent,
Doon the plughole they're sent
With barely a player to fight it
.... there ye go, it's still yours, but if Ah wanted tae claim it as mine, Ah'd replace yer fifth line wi ...
Which got left all good Dons fans excitit!