Good but a couple of mistakes, it should be Masbrough (not Masborough), also the last line is "can't fill me enough"
Tha fills up mi senses
Like a gallon o' Magnet
Like a packet o' Woodbines
Like a good pinch o' snuff
Like a night out in Masbrough
Like a greasy chip butty
Like Rotherham United
Can't fill me enough